Looking for Feedback on Sample Adventure

Hi all…

I’m posting the current draft of the Sample Adventure chapter from the Moebius Adventures Roleplaying Game Core Rules book here for feedback. I am looking for any and all feedback at this point — layout, writing, adventure, and so on.

So please get back to me with your comments!

Thanks

–Fitz

Here’s the link:

Moebius Adventures Roleplaying Game Core Rules Book – Sample Adventure

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